Final: success

I think his mistake is the way he talks. He repeated saying “Reaching the success,….” and it makes listeners kind of boring. Also, he says that, one of the reasons of “success to fail” is “one-way street”. For me, I don’t think it’s the “one-way street”, because there are many streets and walls, so people work hard for success. It’s just not one way, I guess.
The thesis statement would be also “one-way street”. The main points would be “success is a continuous journey.”